WHEN I TAUGHT J-SCHOOL, a fresh semester also meant creating a fresh syllabus and lectures and lab exercises. To do that, I'd set aside several hours a day to study the writing in the various media. From that study, I'd draw actual examples - examples that were specific and concrete, reflected practice rather than theory and applied readily to what the students might see and imitate.
A case of mishearing, doubtless, but it's surprising it got past the editors. The writer means "downright destructive."spj.org/rr.aspWhen I first saw the phrasing "one of the only" (an illiterate swap for "one of the few"), I marveled that a professional writer could have written such a thing. But within days, I saw the expression in the media several times. Curious, I conducted a library search and found in one metro daily more than 40 instances of "one of the only" in its news columns - all within the previous month.* I miss not going to the cabin in the summer.* When he got to the top of the stairs, he said he heard glass breaking.Notoriety is not an achievement - the word is negative and pejorative and should not be confused with simply being of note or famous or celebrated. This writer further underlines his confusion by adding "for good reason or bad." One doesn't become "notorious" by being good. Here are some synonyms for "notoriety": disrepute, disgrace, infamy, dishonor, shame, discredit, unsavory reputation, bad name, ill repute, scandal, ignominy, humiliation. Notoriety is a valuable word that has been cheapened through misuse - largely in the media and largely in sportswriting - but careful wordsmiths observe its distinctions.Below is a potpourri of errors gleaned from a recent media watch. Again, I noticed clusters of the same or similar errors across the media. The same day I saw three "sunk" errors (the boat sunk, the market sunk) in the local newspaper, I also saw the error in the latest novel of a fine Swedish writer - surprising because translators are usually competent grammarians.It sinks. It sank. It has sunk. It will have sunk.Empower YourselfE-mail:
plarocque@sbcglobal.netTries should be try. The verb agrees with "guys who," not "one."* Some, however, find it darn right destructive.Paula LaRocque is author of "The Book on Writing,""On Words"and "Championship Writing." Her first novel, a mystery titled "Chalk Line," will be published by Marion Street Press in 2011.* They got out of the car and lifted out the walker. It sunk in the snow.* She says she has free reign as creative director.What's going on here? By virtue of that word "not," these reporters are writing or saying the opposite of what they intend. The first guy misses having someone to talk to; he doesn't miss nor having someone to talk to, which would mean he has lots of folks to talk to and is tired of it. Likewise, the second guy misses going to the cabin, and the retired teacher misses seeing her students.* He dressed as quickly as he could, fumbling as if he was drunk.The expression is free rein, which refers to giving a horse his head.* After retirement, she said she missed not seeing the students.* Everyone on his list was someone who had achieved notoriety - for good reason or bad.What's the lesson of all this? If you're a wordsmith, be careful with words. Or at least be careful whom you copy!Visit SPJ's reading room for more articles that will help you on your path to becoming a better journalist.* Andrews says he is one of those guys who tries to account for every dime.Website:
www.paulalarocque.com* He says he sometimes misses not having anyone to talk to.The interesting thing was that a specific problem was seldom isolated to one medium - if you saw the error once, you were apt to see it a dozen times. Journalese and the habits of hackery are fast-spreading. So are mistakes. Let one reporter write "an historic" or "irregardless" or "snuck"; let one reporter misspell "just deserts" or "barbecue" or "
chaise longue," and suddenly the error isail over the place.Fumbling as if he were drunk. Errors in the subjunctive are everywhere. Use were, not was, in "if" clauses that are contrary to fact (he is not drunk), or in structures expressing desire or supposition: I wish I were going; if it were up to me.The retired teacher example also presents a common (and gaining ground) punctuation error: failure to place a comma both before and after buried attribution. Forget one of those elegant little squiggles, and meaning flies away. For example, without a comma after "she said," the teacher retired and then said something (after retirement, she said she ...). The sentence means, however, that she is now saying something about her past retirement and its effect on her.
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